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a folly...
I built a bridge across the river
made of wood -
mind you, you can just as easily walk
across a river made of wood...
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Re: a folly...
8th Jul 2015 3:10pm
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Re: a folly...
8th Jul 2015 3:35pm
Once again....I had to reread this a couple of times. I am not so clever to get your wit on the first read, Paul. You. Make. Me. Feel. Stupid. ;-).
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an intelligent mind often fails to understand
a fool - and trust me, I'm a fool..:)
a fool - and trust me, I'm a fool..:)
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