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I quiver and pulse
At the thought,
Of gentle hands
Binding mine.
Kneeling politely
Eyes turned up
Into Yours,
My mouth opens
As you allow
Me, to circle
The tip
With the tip
Of my tongue.
Inch by gentle inch
Sliding in,
Gliding into
My throat.
Sure hands
Full of my hair,
I won't break the stare
Even as tears roll down,
From your soothing thrusts
Turning rhythmic
Swells your cock,
Expanding my chest
To take it on.
I am yours,
Do what you will.
I'll only give
That's what I do,
To feel your control.
At the thought,
Of gentle hands
Binding mine.
Kneeling politely
Eyes turned up
Into Yours,
My mouth opens
As you allow
Me, to circle
The tip
With the tip
Of my tongue.
Inch by gentle inch
Sliding in,
Gliding into
My throat.
Sure hands
Full of my hair,
I won't break the stare
Even as tears roll down,
From your soothing thrusts
Turning rhythmic
Swells your cock,
Expanding my chest
To take it on.
I am yours,
Do what you will.
I'll only give
That's what I do,
To feel your control.
Written by
looloolookie
Published 3rd Jul 2015
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3rd Jul 2015 5:37pm
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3rd Jul 2015 5:56pm
It makes my heart swell to make you happy. Big love. Try Skullcap tea for sleeping. Works for me :)
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Anonymous
3rd Jul 2015 5:47pm
So gently put yet full of erotica, As I take my first sip of coffee, I can easily enjoy this as well!
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3rd Jul 2015 5:57pm
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Anonymous
3rd Jul 2015 5:59pm
looloolookie,
Coffee long gone, only to be refilled with your swelling thoughts. Enjoyed!!!
tornado
Coffee long gone, only to be refilled with your swelling thoughts. Enjoyed!!!
tornado
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3rd Jul 2015 6:33pm
I love this Lookie, and am always looking for "more" of your fine eroticism. Turned on to the max!
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4th Jul 2015 5:18am
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4th Jul 2015 5:25am
Thank you for the RL Ms.Vivid! Happy you enjoyed this little piece. Cheers ;)
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3rd Jul 2015 8:58pm
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4th Jul 2015 00:33am
wow each word gets hotter and hotter... beautifully written lookie... i enjoyed your ink
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4th Jul 2015 5:27am
Very happy you enjoyed this :)
Nice to see some new poets in the line up!
Nice to see some new poets in the line up!
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Anonymous
6th Jul 2015 8:12pm
well.
what a way to spend my 'smoke break' on this monday afternoon. well done! :)
what a way to spend my 'smoke break' on this monday afternoon. well done! :)
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4th Apr 2021 6:08am
I gulped with the thirst on my lips after I finished reading it. That went down so smoothly down my throat like a fine whisky. Very neat.
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