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the present...
I wanted to give her something
so I gave her something I'd recycled
she asked me what it was
I said oh I can't remember
what it was...
Published 1st Jul 2015
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Anonymous
1st Jul 2015 2:41am
Recycled stuff. . .Gifts that keep on Giving! How can she not be flattered??
1st Jul 2015 10:45pm
1st Jul 2015 1:59pm
i really like how your work twists. does that make sense? dual meanings in the word choices. very clever.
1st Jul 2015 10:50pm
thanks, Larks, I've always thought that words
should be used to their full potential, but I
haven't the skill - all I do is use them to influence
the inference..:)
should be used to their full potential, but I
haven't the skill - all I do is use them to influence
the inference..:)
1st Jul 2015 2:53pm
1st Jul 2015 10:51pm
1st Jul 2015 11:04pm
1st Jul 2015 5:20pm
Lol.....you're always good for a laugh, Paul. I mean that in a good way...not a deprecating salute (I have to write this because of the response I anticipate from you: true Paul form).
1st Jul 2015 10:55pm
oh I think "good for a laugh" is lovely -
never thought funny was the opposite
of serious, anyway...
more of a parallel line...
thanks, Virginia..:)
never thought funny was the opposite
of serious, anyway...
more of a parallel line...
thanks, Virginia..:)
2nd Jul 2015 9:14pm
maybe it was a wheel? huh? get it? cycle? re-cycle? wheel? ok. Im done.
2nd Jul 2015 10:55pm
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