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Muted
The shades are an obstruction
driving through the tunnel.
I can’t take them off,
they’re prescription.
I see the lights
and the shape of things.
I keep my foot steady
and breathe slowly.
It’s only a car.
Published 24th Jun 2015
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24th Jun 2015 11:12pm
jaysus, taking a chance aren't you. frankly i'm surprised anyone let you back behind the wheel of anything that moves
anyhow, grand little number, Miss. nice bit of writing, grand it of tension too. good stuff
anyhow, grand little number, Miss. nice bit of writing, grand it of tension too. good stuff
25th Jun 2015 5:50am
Ehhhh, it's only a car.
Cheers for the thoughts. Good to see your paw prints here.
:)
Cheers for the thoughts. Good to see your paw prints here.
:)
24th Jun 2015 11:46pm
This made me laugh, only because I know how you drive in euro traffic bedlam. I'll be back to give a proper comment, just needed to let you know now how much I liked this short piece. Great last line.
25th Jun 2015 5:52am
Mr Aussie, dear, I AM Euro bedlam.
I look forward to your extended comment! Thanks for the add.
I look forward to your extended comment! Thanks for the add.
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