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Am I Allowed ?
To love you as much as I do
It's the quiet moments
When it grabs me from behind
Heartbreak from wanting
Tension that mounts
Laying claim to desire
Lost in feeling
Taking it
Because it's you
It's the quiet moments
When it grabs me from behind
Heartbreak from wanting
Tension that mounts
Laying claim to desire
Lost in feeling
Taking it
Because it's you
Published 23rd Jun 2015
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23rd Jun 2015 8:39pm
Ahhh, Granite, luv ~ :-*
This is really lovely. You've managed to evoke that heart-in-the-throat feeling here of which you so eloquently speak. :-*
Remarkable and full of such rich emotion. Stunning, luv...
This is really lovely. You've managed to evoke that heart-in-the-throat feeling here of which you so eloquently speak. :-*
Remarkable and full of such rich emotion. Stunning, luv...
23rd Jun 2015 8:42pm
Thank you
These write themselves because they are fantasy mixed with reality and back to fantasy ....
Appreciate your kind words
These write themselves because they are fantasy mixed with reality and back to fantasy ....
Appreciate your kind words
23rd Jun 2015 8:56pm
i get this. i have no idea what your actual voice sounds like, but your poetic voice is clear and strong. well done.
23rd Jun 2015 9:06pm
23rd Jun 2015 9:11pm
Heartbreak from wanting
^^^^^
i swear the universe is comprising to make me weep this week...
... tres belle, tres doux Mister Sybil xo
^^^^^
i swear the universe is comprising to make me weep this week...
... tres belle, tres doux Mister Sybil xo
23rd Jun 2015 10:19pm
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23rd Jun 2015 9:28pm
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