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*Crushin' on the Slickest Pistol
I'm crushin' on the slickest pistol.
..my serious case.. of weak knees..
Shootin' straight hot innuendo,
..I am a target to the bullet feed..
Black curtain silk tattoos his eyes
spider-laced cool, spun on surprise.
Don't wanna close greens on Time,
..might miss his dark sonnet sighs..
his palm-hold pinning hip so firm
battered acid-loves leak out stern
bleeding sour pouts on my burn.
Trace and unlace our pale fingertips
stroke my dark shine on crushed kiss..
I'm decent enough, so damp in my hush-
..dripping tangled honey on your tongue.
Find breath inside my mouth of hope..
as you exhale.. I breathe for us both.
Seems I've gotta itchy.. trigger finger..
pores rebelling skin tossed linger.
Flatulent obsession, my forensic lesson,
"Darlin.. I'm [hear] for your confession."
Bury anoesis.. of your too-tall drawl..
'cause it still rubs my tempest so raw,
shakes me as bold sugar done right..
"Gaze me, ..I am ruined to your sight.."
Now cringe sweet for me, hip to hip fit
stare me blind as you *spill- swill..split*
Ballistic trauma of my steel desire
placed hermetic lust 'tween jagged eyes..
Rock hard(on) silver bullet's ride
(bang...smoke.) opened up your "mind"
you(r head) wetly offered me..All inside.
*fer the Everything Dark & Sinister Comp*
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3mvgYVX2rs4
"Marilyn Manson - The Love Song" (inspire)
Published 22nd Jun 2015
| Edited 10th Oct 2015
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Anonymous
22nd Jun 2015 11:18am
shades of combichrist's "bullet fuck" all over this bloody sensuality, soul sister...
"Now cringe sweet for me, hip to
hip fit
stare me blind as you
*spill- swill..split*
... ohh ohh ohh yes! do i love that sweet~vicious of right there
*
always making my heart race darling one
loveeeee love loved this!
"Now cringe sweet for me, hip to
hip fit
stare me blind as you
*spill- swill..split*
... ohh ohh ohh yes! do i love that sweet~vicious of right there
*
always making my heart race darling one
loveeeee love loved this!
23rd Jun 2015 6:10am
Much luvz my soul-sis..missin u already gal..come bk soon! We darkest needs intermingle often.
always honored by your presence on my pages &
shall search out your work forevers fer my fix!
mwahs
~d
always honored by your presence on my pages &
shall search out your work forevers fer my fix!
mwahs
~d
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Sep 2020 3:45am
22nd Jun 2015 1:10pm
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23rd Jun 2015 6:22am
You gals are soo brave to venture in 'midst my awful-steely lust-shot venting mood I was in 'other nite!.. omg!...to his head!
(chicago movie comes ta mind, the "not-guilty" girls & their songs)..ha! e-me if I sound nuts
here k? I'll s'plain ;) lmarse-O!
thx alwayz fer reading, my kindred Taryn
~d
(chicago movie comes ta mind, the "not-guilty" girls & their songs)..ha! e-me if I sound nuts
here k? I'll s'plain ;) lmarse-O!
thx alwayz fer reading, my kindred Taryn
~d
24th Jun 2015 7:58am
must be a long barrel on that .45 you're packin'.
air's gettin thick with all those innuendo's, I'll be in the saloon if you need me...
air's gettin thick with all those innuendo's, I'll be in the saloon if you need me...
24th Jun 2015 2:53pm
Har-har! ..Throw back one(or Ten) fer me sweetie!
ty fer the comp read m'friend, was a delicious
song to work with.
..stumblin frm those ten..
she rights herself to an all proper curtsy to u, SirJ. (ty)
~d
ty fer the comp read m'friend, was a delicious
song to work with.
..stumblin frm those ten..
she rights herself to an all proper curtsy to u, SirJ. (ty)
~d
25th Jun 2015 9:32pm
Man, dig this; very groovy write ma friend... Dig the Manson song, it added layer of depth to this, extra space in the minds eye... This reads as a good hard song to me, it has a songs natural flow... Reminds me of a sexy blues rock anthem, kinda like Danzig, She Rides... Take good care chica: wolf
26th Jun 2015 4:58pm
aww..you! gotsa give thx ur way m'dear, or I mighta missed this one. Tried to stay with the song flow
& curtsy-like-crazy t'you, that it worked(lil bit)
heavy innuendo & mi pistola thank you wolfpoet,
you are ever cool misters, 'preciate seein ya here!
peace on dark rains to u ;)
~d
& curtsy-like-crazy t'you, that it worked(lil bit)
heavy innuendo & mi pistola thank you wolfpoet,
you are ever cool misters, 'preciate seein ya here!
peace on dark rains to u ;)
~d
