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Linger a little longer there
my lips pleading
it's a trap you see
for the longer your lips are upon mine
my thirst is quenched
my lips drink you in
they try to weaken your reserve
making you dizzy
with my lips
there is no time or space
just moments
and memories
and so much more...
my lips pleading
it's a trap you see
for the longer your lips are upon mine
my thirst is quenched
my lips drink you in
they try to weaken your reserve
making you dizzy
with my lips
there is no time or space
just moments
and memories
and so much more...
Published 21st Jun 2015
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21st Jun 2015 1:12pm
I think this is a good effort, especially the last few lines. Poetry is either in you or it isn't. Keep writing to find your voice.
3rd Jul 2015 2:04am
