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you think I'm looking good, but...
I can never keep my shirt clean,
you know..? I mean I put one on today -
and this morning it was all shiny white,
but now it's more Dorian Gray...
Published 14th Jun 2015
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15th Jun 2015 2:45am
15th Jun 2015 10:02am
15th Jun 2015 5:42am
it is the cleverest shirt
I ever had! - mind you, there are
a few wrinkles that could do
with ironing out..:)
I ever had! - mind you, there are
a few wrinkles that could do
with ironing out..:)
16th Jun 2015 00:18am
16th Jun 2015 00:19am
16th Jun 2015 4:33am
Ahhh, dartford, luv ~ :-*
You got me thinking so hard about this piece, I thought I'd responded and I see I hadn't. ;-p
I was trapped in a conundrum involving that gray shirt being on you and not in the closet and how unique 'twould be to see one's deeds enacted...ah well. You see, I truly had a philosophical moment, luv.
Thank you for that... ;-*
You got me thinking so hard about this piece, I thought I'd responded and I see I hadn't. ;-p
I was trapped in a conundrum involving that gray shirt being on you and not in the closet and how unique 'twould be to see one's deeds enacted...ah well. You see, I truly had a philosophical moment, luv.
Thank you for that... ;-*
16th Jun 2015 9:44am
