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Cringe Benefits
Another hole-
an altered 'broken'..
Past fears. Present tokens.
Volumes spoken, riddled mind
tomes withstood crumble of time.
My 'broken' shines
deep wet with heat
glassy puddles, shredded feet.
In every focus
a jaded sign..
Condemned. 'Nary a crime.
Cringe benefits?
They are mine.
Seething
rush as pustules
unsaved by deeds of Mellitus.
I kneel, offer heart flesh.
Din' tongue on taste as sated
skin of me, torn..faded.
Granted, useless shell.
Eternal 'broken'..
m'wishing well.
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13th Jun 2015 00:02am
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re: Re: Cringe Benefits
13th Jun 2015 5:59am
Aww thx Taryn..truth? I am shattered soul
this eve, & I got hand-fulls of glass. ;(
I am still snifflin' thx fer your heartwarming comment, you are golden in my eyes sweetie.
and alwys luvz (o'course)..
~d
this eve, & I got hand-fulls of glass. ;(
I am still snifflin' thx fer your heartwarming comment, you are golden in my eyes sweetie.
and alwys luvz (o'course)..
~d
Re: Cringe Benefits
13th Jun 2015 3:02am
the amazingments of creeeee'ative
heartsoulmind.
Hoodoo wee think wee are? anyway?
heartsoulmind.
Hoodoo wee think wee are? anyway?
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re: Re: Cringe Benefits
13th Jun 2015 6:06am
Thanx much fer splashin' me sum brightnes
m'dear..
this heartsoulmind is having sad
soul shakes tonight & ur presence is most appreciated!
take care ;) <~sad but still smiles.
~d
m'dear..
this heartsoulmind is having sad
soul shakes tonight & ur presence is most appreciated!
take care ;) <~sad but still smiles.
~d
Re: Cringe Benefits
13th Jun 2015 4:04am
"If you could read my mind Love, what a tale my thoughts could tell..."
Felt this more deeply than your normal; hope all is well. xo
Felt this more deeply than your normal; hope all is well. xo
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re: Re: Cringe Benefits
13th Jun 2015 6:10am
You are sharp insight as always m'lady, I am
soo huggin' you rite now. (ty)
Tattered to dark shreds, I feel..Gddss make
him see, I say.
loves you much fer reading me so well (healer, u)
~d
soo huggin' you rite now. (ty)
Tattered to dark shreds, I feel..Gddss make
him see, I say.
loves you much fer reading me so well (healer, u)
~d
re: re: Re: Cringe Benefits
13th Jun 2015 5:33pm
You're on the threshing floor, my dear. And, it blows. While I rarely allow myself to see past one second of now, I will for you, tell you that what's to come will unlock a deeper vault of verse for all of us. xo
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re: re: re: Re: Cringe Benefits
13th Jun 2015 6:04pm
Raining hugs on you gf..gotta ground sumwhere
in heartache & I promise..lookin fer a solid
landing spot.
ty warmly, fer ur words! ;)
~d
in heartache & I promise..lookin fer a solid
landing spot.
ty warmly, fer ur words! ;)
~d
Re: Cringe Benefits
14th Jun 2015 6:57am
I've spoken of the well of sorrow that ev'ry woman bears within. spiritual waters, amrita that will embolden you...
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re: Re: Cringe Benefits
14th Jun 2015 6:40pm
"Spiritual waters"...sound lovely SirJ..
you are one of few w/the ability to spin
gold on m'snots n sniffles dearest, ty fondly!
be wellz
~d
you are one of few w/the ability to spin
gold on m'snots n sniffles dearest, ty fondly!
be wellz
~d
Re: Cringe Benefits
Anonymous
14th Jun 2015 1:08pm
oh my sweet sighs. such mournful beauty spilling from you here...
"My 'broken' shines
deep
wet with heat
glassy puddles, shredded feet.
"
... hugs to you, dear one xo
"My 'broken' shines
deep
wet with heat
glassy puddles, shredded feet.
"
... hugs to you, dear one xo
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re: Re: Cringe Benefits
14th Jun 2015 6:45pm
I'm rackin' up soul spills it seems, m'darling.
You are alwyz a welcome flame to this cool I
find 'round corners..
luvzu big-times fer that!
irreplaceable, you are, m'seestr ;)
~d
You are alwyz a welcome flame to this cool I
find 'round corners..
luvzu big-times fer that!
irreplaceable, you are, m'seestr ;)
~d
Re: Cringe Benefits
14th Jun 2015 10:40pm
re: Re: Cringe Benefits
15th Jun 2015 4:49am
I am all smiles to see you here!
Most appreciate the company, sweet man! Rain equals pour on the page..I need rugs..er towels maybe?? eeks..
thx fer readin, be wells ;)
~d
Most appreciate the company, sweet man! Rain equals pour on the page..I need rugs..er towels maybe?? eeks..
thx fer readin, be wells ;)
~d