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She was in the palm of your hand
surrounded by touch,giving way
letting you taste
she was just what you needed
swelling in the right places
while you fed off her
bodies swaying,color in cheeks
glistening sweat,flowing through
one another
she slides smoothly over you
and your voice calls out,wanting
her silky wet wings
you love her all over
surrounded by touch,giving way
letting you taste
she was just what you needed
swelling in the right places
while you fed off her
bodies swaying,color in cheeks
glistening sweat,flowing through
one another
she slides smoothly over you
and your voice calls out,wanting
her silky wet wings
you love her all over
Published 12th Jun 2015
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12th Jun 2015 5:30am
Tommie, you know how to generate tingles head-to-toe! This piece is so sexy, The most sensual passage for me is:
"she was just what you needed
swelling in the right places
while you fed off her"
ZING!!
"she was just what you needed
swelling in the right places
while you fed off her"
ZING!!
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12th Jun 2015 6:17pm
"Silky wet wings." Sounds like an erotic angel, all that Heaven allows. Fine work!
13th Jun 2015 1:15pm
