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Chipped Ice His Heart and Soul
Upon his heart, a scar
forever worn, placed there
as if sewn long ago, did
she . . .
with black widow's skill of weave,
agony's needle so deftly thread
with fingers of icy spikes
on cold frigid hands, did
she . . .
took heavy black string of sorrow,
attached unbearably strong aching hurt,
so intense, ungodly and horrid,
lesser ones of weaker heart have died
from such when applied, did
she . . .
imprisoned his heart in a fortress
of glaciers, walls of ice forged
by frozen nails and rivets of frost
borne of fear and frightful pain from
she . . .
guardian of the heartbreak he hoped
desperately to vanquish, but instead,
it was the love he sought that was
subdued, conquered and driven away by
she . . .
forced me to fight harder to free him,
only to fail, losing miserably every
battle lost, did I, until my heat was
depleted, disabled and useless for
thawing my lover's frigid heart.
she . . .
I have never met, but hate her;
she . . .
cold and heartless Succubus,
she . . .
left for me the reap sown by her,
so much cruelty resides within her,
such a hyper-devious and evil bitch
. . . she!
GreenLipstick
Published 9th Jun 2015
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9th Jun 2015 11:09pm
She-Bitch! Claw her eyes out!
Unfortunately we can love none but those willing to be loved. Hopefully one day he will heal himself by remembering how much more beautiful the warmth of arms are.
Good write.
Unfortunately we can love none but those willing to be loved. Hopefully one day he will heal himself by remembering how much more beautiful the warmth of arms are.
Good write.
10th Jun 2015 00:09am
"She-Bitch! Claw her eyes out!"
What a classic line and funny as hell!
Re your further comment, "let the church say amen; this sister speaketh truth! Although, I've tried both to love, and be loved, by such a person, it wasn't written for me, personally. It's my tribute to all those who've met that right person, carrying the wrong baggage. And, no matter how or what you say or do, they just won't fling that shit over the railing and into the sea, to allow life and love to move on!
Thanks so much for allowing me to entertain, enlighten and be enlightened, by you!
Green
What a classic line and funny as hell!
Re your further comment, "let the church say amen; this sister speaketh truth! Although, I've tried both to love, and be loved, by such a person, it wasn't written for me, personally. It's my tribute to all those who've met that right person, carrying the wrong baggage. And, no matter how or what you say or do, they just won't fling that shit over the railing and into the sea, to allow life and love to move on!
Thanks so much for allowing me to entertain, enlighten and be enlightened, by you!
Green
10th Jun 2015 00:11am
