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Sensual attack: P4/5 - smell (dark)
Cigarette smoke lingered on your breath and on your fingertips.
Sweat stained the air with its potent aroma and ghastly origins.
The once safe small of my bedroom, long since forgotten and replaced by whiffs of insecurity and betrayal.
Sweat stained the air with its potent aroma and ghastly origins.
The once safe small of my bedroom, long since forgotten and replaced by whiffs of insecurity and betrayal.
Published 9th Jun 2015
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12th Jun 2015 7:33pm
"Sensual attack" is kind of an oxymoron. Some of the detailing of these chapters is erotic, but the betrayal cries for vengeance.
12th Jun 2015 8:45pm
