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Has To Be Short
My tool is ready for your use
take all you need
in this instance I enjoy the attribute
and you showing your bodily greed
I have been anticipating giving it to you
going deeper and making you scream
two bodies connected in lust
as if we are recreating the most intimate dream...
take all you need
in this instance I enjoy the attribute
and you showing your bodily greed
I have been anticipating giving it to you
going deeper and making you scream
two bodies connected in lust
as if we are recreating the most intimate dream...
Published 6th Jun 2015
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6th Jun 2015 10:24am
There are so many entendres in the title. That is clever. Not a stellar poem since you practically forced it to rhyme but a decent effort. And a hot one. I have to say I enjoyed it.
6th Jun 2015 1:02pm
thanks...also found a couple of errors. Love to blame it on being weary from kitchen remodeling but I might be slipping in my old age! :(
