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his whispers vibrate
rattling the chambers of love
tremors richter deep
[Entered in Noir Haiku- Women's Comp Hosted by DevlinDLC]
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his whispers vibrate
rattling the chambers of love
tremors richter deep
[Entered in Noir Haiku- Women's Comp Hosted by DevlinDLC]
Published 5th Jun 2015
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Anonymous
5th Jun 2015 4:47pm
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8th Jun 2015 1:26pm
Hellooooooo Reks!
Welcome back, it's so good to see you again!
Thank you so much for your comment ; )
Welcome back, it's so good to see you again!
Thank you so much for your comment ; )
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Sep 2020 3:45am
5th Jun 2015 5:35pm
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8th Jun 2015 1:28pm
5th Jun 2015 6:17pm
vibrate
rattling
tremors
Ohhh, yeah! :)
Lena, I like it. I like it a lot!
xo
C.
rattling
tremors
Ohhh, yeah! :)
Lena, I like it. I like it a lot!
xo
C.
LOL.....I thought you might sir.
I know you've been causing a few yourself ; )
xo
I know you've been causing a few yourself ; )
xo
10th Jun 2015 5:13am
6th Jul 2015 2:21pm
30th Jun 2015 2:51am
that is a most appealing way (or one of them) to disturb those chambers...
30th Jun 2015 4:48pm
Anonymous
6th Jul 2015 1:07am
Very good Senryu Lena, the chosen wording tie up so well with the theme.
i think this is your strength.
i have such huge respect to micro/haiku style of poetry, not easy to convey with so little.
i think this is your strength.
i have such huge respect to micro/haiku style of poetry, not easy to convey with so little.
6th Jul 2015 2:20pm
29th Jul 2015 5:29pm
you did absolutely beautiful job with this haiku... 5-7-5 perfect! and it speaks volume too... awesome delivery Lena :D
29th Jul 2015 5:56pm
Thank you so much for the compliment, it's an honor coming from you Magic!
...and you are right on target with volumes ; )
...and you are right on target with volumes ; )
Anonymous
31st Jul 2015 9:23pm
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1st Aug 2015 10:25pm
22nd Aug 2015 5:50pm
23rd Aug 2015 8:35pm
Thank you Shauna!
It's great to meet you.
I'm glad you felt it because I certainly felt it deep at that moment ; )
It's great to meet you.
I'm glad you felt it because I certainly felt it deep at that moment ; )
Anonymous
- Edited 8th Nov 2018 00:49am
28th Nov 2015 9:12am
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1st Dec 2015 4:22pm
Anonymous
23rd Jan 2018 1:53pm
ohhh...this is sexy!!!
23rd Jan 2018 2:00pm
