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unsealed tomb
life leave me not so soon
breath heave me from my tomb
blood bring warmth to my skin
agony bring me to feel once again
light put an end to darkness
beauty bring color to my eyes
flowers bring sent to me
food bring taste my mouth
and stone bring feel back to my finger tips.
breath heave me from my tomb
blood bring warmth to my skin
agony bring me to feel once again
light put an end to darkness
beauty bring color to my eyes
flowers bring sent to me
food bring taste my mouth
and stone bring feel back to my finger tips.
Published 2nd Jun 2015
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2nd Jun 2015 4:37am
Nice choice of words and cadence: Life leave me not so soon, breath heave me from my tomb
2nd Jun 2015 11:28am
2nd Jun 2015 2:06pm
It leaves a tender imprint of longing for life as long as it can last.
Because you have asked...
scent*
Also, maybe a 'to' prior to taste
Because you have asked...
scent*
Also, maybe a 'to' prior to taste
4th Jun 2015 5:06am
