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he turned up at her
door
with a bottle of
gin -
she said so what's that
for -
oh it's just a way
in...
Published 28th May 2015
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28th May 2015 1:04am
He does have a way with the charm. There's always room for gin and juice. Truly, Paul, you're a delight to read. :)
28th May 2015 1:11am
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28th May 2015 2:53am
Genius!
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28th May 2015 3:24am
phew....that's a relief. Aye canno drink no firewater.
it's an ugly sight ifn eye do.
28th May 2015 3:14am
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28th May 2015 7:07am
Riddles! That's it, riddles. You've been teasing at my mind, dartford, luv :-*. Teasing, lo these many long months (yes, even whilst I was away ;-p) and that's the art within the art with which you're blessing us.
You absolute gem! :-* :-* :-*
Single-handedly, you're doing it and ever so adroitly!
Oh! Now, I've got to go back to the beginning.
Lord, dartford... ;-p
;-*
You absolute gem! :-* :-* :-*
Single-handedly, you're doing it and ever so adroitly!
Oh! Now, I've got to go back to the beginning.
Lord, dartford... ;-p
;-*
28th May 2015 10:49am
Sav, you're far too kind to me and
my little poems...
but I'm not complaing..!
I'm just thankful you're out there,
so thank you...
my little poems...
but I'm not complaing..!
I'm just thankful you're out there,
so thank you...
29th May 2015 1:55am
29th May 2015 3:16pm
stainless steel is a bottle opener - Gin is a leg opener - I can't remember who said that
another wee cracker from your mighty pen :-)
another wee cracker from your mighty pen :-)
7th Jun 2015 1:39pm
