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A woman's pleasure
The sounds you made
Your moans
Your cries of intoxication
And joyousness
Conspired together
To cause the cascade
Of my bouquet
From deep within
You were so scrumptious
To my ears
All I could think of
Was
Your divine honey on my tongue
My face betwixt your succulent thighs
Your bewitching aroma inebriating me
I wanted
Your juices
All over my face
I wanted
To hear you
Scream with abandon
As I brought you
Again and again
I wanted
You gasping
Out of breath
My fingers inside you
You clamped down hard on them
As I teased you with lips and tongue yet more
I wanted to be dripping betwixt my thighs
From feasting upon you
Luxuriating in your sighs
A word if I may
To those who would hear:
A woman's pleasure
Is a treasure, that's certain
If you would know glee beyond measure
Tend well to her needs
Let her be free with you
Judge not her pleas...
Your moans
Your cries of intoxication
And joyousness
Conspired together
To cause the cascade
Of my bouquet
From deep within
You were so scrumptious
To my ears
All I could think of
Was
Your divine honey on my tongue
My face betwixt your succulent thighs
Your bewitching aroma inebriating me
I wanted
Your juices
All over my face
I wanted
To hear you
Scream with abandon
As I brought you
Again and again
I wanted
You gasping
Out of breath
My fingers inside you
You clamped down hard on them
As I teased you with lips and tongue yet more
I wanted to be dripping betwixt my thighs
From feasting upon you
Luxuriating in your sighs
A word if I may
To those who would hear:
A woman's pleasure
Is a treasure, that's certain
If you would know glee beyond measure
Tend well to her needs
Let her be free with you
Judge not her pleas...
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Re: A woman's pleasure
24th May 2015 11:14pm
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24th May 2015 11:20pm
Re: A woman's pleasure
25th May 2015 00:56am
re: Re: A woman's pleasure
25th May 2015 3:51am
I am glad you enjoyed, HadesRising, luv - enjoyed enough to require a cold shower. ;-*
Thank you for such an (mmm...) evocative image, luv.
Thank you for such an (mmm...) evocative image, luv.
Re: A woman's pleasure
25th May 2015 1:46am
A delicious buffet of pleasure simultaneously satisfying both thirst and hunger while bringing immense happiness in return for the feast... a great write indeed! JJ
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re: Re: A woman's pleasure
Ahhh, Poetryman, luv ~ :-*
Such clarity of perspective you have. Thank you so much for seeing so deeply and so clearly, luv, and for your immense charitableness in proclaiming my poem great. :-*
Such clarity of perspective you have. Thank you so much for seeing so deeply and so clearly, luv, and for your immense charitableness in proclaiming my poem great. :-*
Re: A woman's pleasure
25th May 2015 7:58am
you get very explicit here w/the facial reference, it's a highly arousing image...
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re: Re: A woman's pleasure
26th May 2015 2:19am
JohnFeddeler, luv ~ :-*
It is inordinately pleasing to me that something I find vastly stimulating is highly arousing for you.
I believe you've made my day. ;-*
It is inordinately pleasing to me that something I find vastly stimulating is highly arousing for you.
I believe you've made my day. ;-*
Re: A woman's pleasure
25th May 2015 6:50pm
Well written, Savaja. I love the last stanza. The overall conciseness is perfection.
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re: Re: A woman's pleasure
27th May 2015 10:46pm
Ahhh, Pishashee, luv ~ :-*
Thank you very much, indeed. You are such an exemplary writer that I find myself aglow with pleasure from your praise.
Nay, pleasure is too tame a word here, luv - name it bliss, ecstasy mayhap.
Hmmm... ;-*
Thank you very much, indeed. You are such an exemplary writer that I find myself aglow with pleasure from your praise.
Nay, pleasure is too tame a word here, luv - name it bliss, ecstasy mayhap.
Hmmm... ;-*
Re: A woman's pleasure
25th May 2015 11:54pm
Savaja, you know my philosophy. If you're not thinking of eating pussy twenty-four hours a day, you're not trying! :)~~
This is delicious x2!
xo
C.
This is delicious x2!
xo
C.
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re: Re: A woman's pleasure
27th May 2015 10:50pm
VegasPoet, luv ~ :-*
Have I mentioned lately how I rather adore you?
Aaaaand that philosophy of yours. ;-*
YOU'RE rather delicious! May I taste...
Sir? ;-*
Thank you ever so much for absolutely making my day with this comment of yours, luv. :-*
Have I mentioned lately how I rather adore you?
Aaaaand that philosophy of yours. ;-*
YOU'RE rather delicious! May I taste...
Sir? ;-*
Thank you ever so much for absolutely making my day with this comment of yours, luv. :-*
Re: A woman's pleasure
26th May 2015 2:18am
A titillating instruction manual indeed! Your super sensuality is so visceral and vivid.
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re: Re: A woman's pleasure
Ahhh, Gahddess_Worship, luv ~ :-*
Thank you ever so much, you who worship the goddess and see women's beauty so acutely. :-*
Hints, let's say; instructions sounds rather limiting, eh? ;-p
I think most women contain intense sensuality within; I am as they...
Nonetheless, you have gifted me exquisitely; I feel quite the lush seductress, luv. ;-*
Thank you ever so much, you who worship the goddess and see women's beauty so acutely. :-*
Hints, let's say; instructions sounds rather limiting, eh? ;-p
I think most women contain intense sensuality within; I am as they...
Nonetheless, you have gifted me exquisitely; I feel quite the lush seductress, luv. ;-*
Re: A woman's pleasure
26th May 2015 7:08am
loved every word...free flowing ..smoldering and intoxicating..keep up the good work..keep them cuming!!!(no pun intended)
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re: Re: A woman's pleasure
28th May 2015 1:32am
Aussieinmumbai, luv ~ :-*
Thank you very much for your abundant scorching praise! :-*
I will keep your injunction in mind, luv. ;-*
Thank you very much for your abundant scorching praise! :-*
I will keep your injunction in mind, luv. ;-*
Re: A woman's pleasure
26th May 2015 2:48pm
Mmmmmm you ain't neva lie!! A woman's moans, groans, yells, pleas n screams ALL inspire me to keep
UP the pleasuring, have no concept of STOP lol
Delicious imagery, n who wouldn't want to have a front row seat to view pink meat, eating pink meat!? lol
UP the pleasuring, have no concept of STOP lol
Delicious imagery, n who wouldn't want to have a front row seat to view pink meat, eating pink meat!? lol
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re: Re: A woman's pleasure
28th May 2015 2:05am
Mercy, Poetikmind, luv ~ :-*
No concept of stop??? ;-*
Oh. My.
Care to assist me in discovering somewhat I've always wondered about myself? ;-p
Never mind, luv. I shan't impose.
Travieso (naughty man) - front row seat indeed! Why do I just know you wrote that grinning? ;-*
No concept of stop??? ;-*
Oh. My.
Care to assist me in discovering somewhat I've always wondered about myself? ;-p
Never mind, luv. I shan't impose.
Travieso (naughty man) - front row seat indeed! Why do I just know you wrote that grinning? ;-*
Re: A woman's pleasure
30th May 2015 5:20am
Oh gosh my heart is beating too fast, reading these words made mist fall upon me.. mmh tantalizing deeply. Edible piece
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re: Re: A woman's pleasure
30th May 2015 6:54pm
Ahhh, Noire HowlingWhelms, luv ~ :-*
What a succulent twist of the tongue you have... ;-*
Mist, eh, luv? I am unbelievably flattered.
I'll have to taste...Mmm...your poesy since you've teased me so very well. ;-*
I find myself intrigued...
What a succulent twist of the tongue you have... ;-*
Mist, eh, luv? I am unbelievably flattered.
I'll have to taste...Mmm...your poesy since you've teased me so very well. ;-*
I find myself intrigued...
Re: A woman's pleasure
3rd Jun 2015 7:21pm
If I can be so very honest.. After reading this, I smiled in three places..
Smiled with warmth in one, understanding in the other and last I smiled with desire there..
Smiled with warmth in one, understanding in the other and last I smiled with desire there..
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re: Re: A woman's pleasure
16th Jun 2015 11:56am
Vivid_mocha, luv ~ :-*
Your honesty is enthralling. I see your warmth, understanding, and desire and I feel them. More than that, I reciprocate, luv. ;-*
Your honesty is enthralling. I see your warmth, understanding, and desire and I feel them. More than that, I reciprocate, luv. ;-*