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Imperfect
I've been drowning in your blood bath
You knew I couldn't swim
With my head below the water
I watched you walk away
Each footstep took a million
Of the breathes I'd take away
You took each one and sucked them in
Oh your childish selfish ways
You said I don't deserve to live?
I've got nothing in this heart to give
Well you were the one who imperfected me
You were the one who made me like this
So now as you gracefully watch me die
You've no fear to look me in the eye
Your demented daughter cries
And you'll never find her tears...
You knew I couldn't swim
With my head below the water
I watched you walk away
Each footstep took a million
Of the breathes I'd take away
You took each one and sucked them in
Oh your childish selfish ways
You said I don't deserve to live?
I've got nothing in this heart to give
Well you were the one who imperfected me
You were the one who made me like this
So now as you gracefully watch me die
You've no fear to look me in the eye
Your demented daughter cries
And you'll never find her tears...
Published 25th May 2011
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25th May 2011 2:31pm
1st Jun 2011 00:21am
13th Nov 2012 2:34am
I love this! All the insanity makes my veins turn grey and my blood turn like ice !!
5th Feb 2016 9:35pm
Relatively fluid until the end. Some vivid use of descriptions & placement. Cold & personal through out. Keep Grindin CAOS737
