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Once Again
Lust in his eye's,
the taste of salt
upon her skin
Breasts rising,
falling,underneath
soft silk
She is caught in
the darkness of his
hot-blooded mouth
Bare hands removing
her clothing,for a
new beginning
Savages,breathing life
into each other,breathless
life,once again
Sinking into her depth
he's engulfed in her warmth,
such sweet pain
the taste of salt
upon her skin
Breasts rising,
falling,underneath
soft silk
She is caught in
the darkness of his
hot-blooded mouth
Bare hands removing
her clothing,for a
new beginning
Savages,breathing life
into each other,breathless
life,once again
Sinking into her depth
he's engulfed in her warmth,
such sweet pain
Published 22nd May 2015
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22nd May 2015 3:05am
Anonymous
22nd May 2015 3:17am
tommielynn,
Hot and heavy! Like it! :-)
tornado
Hot and heavy! Like it! :-)
tornado
22nd May 2015 3:18am
22nd May 2015 3:22am
Tommie, you know so well how to turn up my thermostat :) The image this stanza conjures is breathtaking:
"Breasts rising,
falling,underneath
soft silk"
I can picture so well that anchor rising and falling.
"Breasts rising,
falling,underneath
soft silk"
I can picture so well that anchor rising and falling.
22nd May 2015 3:31am
Ahhh, Tommie Lynn, luv ~ :-*
This poem is quite an earthy, sensual delight.
She is caught in
the darkness of his
hot-blooded mouth
And
Savages,breathing life
into each other,breathless
life,once again
And
Sinking into her depth
he's engulfed in her warmth,
such sweet pain
Stellar, stellar, stellar stanzas, luv! :-*
Phenomenal poetry you've written here yet again.
It is good to see you; I've rather missed you, luv... :-*
This poem is quite an earthy, sensual delight.
She is caught in
the darkness of his
hot-blooded mouth
And
Savages,breathing life
into each other,breathless
life,once again
And
Sinking into her depth
he's engulfed in her warmth,
such sweet pain
Stellar, stellar, stellar stanzas, luv! :-*
Phenomenal poetry you've written here yet again.
It is good to see you; I've rather missed you, luv... :-*
22nd May 2015 8:39pm
