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If Tommorow Was Yesterday, Would It Be A Problem For Today?
struck
dumb dumbstruck, 1/2 'alive' on
a
delusion's 'good' day/////goodGawd,man
whathfck happened
to you? /////
fckd up the way times slips away, (or does it?)
fckd up the way wee slip
a
way, declining, repulsing, no sprig-of-yoot
dare touch the
pseudo ghost....'they' smell funny too ///
too many
clichés
clogging art
eries, fckn'up, quivering yr heart'lecticity.
y'gotta turn away....tis inevitable....(livin'delusion
going to force ye to)
compassion dissolves quickly, cause don't anybody
know shit'bout whathfck "It" is.
think a bout it....if'only for the sake of forgetting
to think "I knew" anything here,
before or after you
left the silly promise of
fore'ever
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Published 20th May 2015
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Anonymous
20th May 2015 6:01am
nice write Dada:)..and for the record, just as silly as a promise of "forever", "age" has nada to do with anything either. I've known a 17 yr. old wise man that taught me meditation and the purification of white sage and I've known countless 50 yr. old fools..
20th May 2015 5:24pm
yup...takes all kinds....they're everywhere....end-
possibilities......(
o,
where are 'you',
dearly beloved?
)
Anonymous
20th May 2015 6:15am
First off, Sir DanielX, your title. . .gripping, eye catching, memorable. . .your poem however, really had me thinking, or shall I say, my head tripping (as always). . .the words moved me, and the inspiration within this piece makes me not fear "slipping away". . .xoxo, Devlin;)
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