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The Immortals

My head hurts, my eyes struggle to open
My heartbeat gradually fails
I sit and watch my hands transform  
my thoughts to written words
How quietly I deny some honest words  
space in my head
How desperately I cling to life
scared I might draw my last breath
 
Such is the state of man;
When sickness brings him to the brink of death  
he remembers how lucky he is to have lived
But when he is strong and healthy
He thinks himself immortal
Written by wanderer (Faceless)
Published | Edited 7th Nov 2016
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