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Mind Tumble
An invitation, sent inside
the deep caress of your mind.
I feed you vision, of sunset's fall.
You are the night- sensation tall.
I brush you soft, with palest lips.
Feel me. The wind, in gentle kiss.
Nipping you slow, that hidden place
on shoulders crevice, lovely taste.
Intoxicating, breathing more
The scent of you. My tempest storm.
Our forms shimmer as shadows fade,
I bend to knees. A need to taste.
A crown of midnight, I bow to feed,
slide down so hard, with mouth of need.
Your fists- a tangle in my hair
Tongue in swirl, eyes meet.. stare.
I fasten tight, as you warm dip,
mouth in suckle, greedy sip.
Burning tempest, I mount while you stand
and plunge down fast, my rear in hand.
Small palms on shoulder, so I sway,
In lazy circles, hips of play...
Grinding low in final thrust-
I end mind-merge in throes of lust.
Published 18th May 2015
| Edited 20th Jul 2015
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18th May 2015 5:54am
27th May 2015 3:52am
Thank you *SO much for the read, lady..Always-always a smile for your time!
;)
~d
;)
~d
22nd May 2015 9:01am
I love the depth in your imagery and the action it portrays. Not just images of passion, but moving scenes that flow in a series of waves that caress the mind with living fantasies. You insert details in words that display whispers between the lines... jj
27th May 2015 4:08am
Aww JJ...there you go again, evoking happy sighs with such a *jewel of a reply ;)
I'm soo guilty of word abuse- amusement and me, as I hack up words & band-aid em in hyphens and commas (where I break the lines up, for reading flavor) ha!
Means much, mister-man, ty!
~d
I'm soo guilty of word abuse- amusement and me, as I hack up words & band-aid em in hyphens and commas (where I break the lines up, for reading flavor) ha!
Means much, mister-man, ty!
~d
Anonymous
27th May 2015 3:42am
A fine imagery dance of love and lust.
27th May 2015 4:20am
Fine line that jumbles on lust and love, glad that you see both here!
Warmest thank-you's for gracing my post and taking the time to reply to the dance ;)
take care
~d
Warmest thank-you's for gracing my post and taking the time to reply to the dance ;)
take care
~d
