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On tummy...
I drop down bold, draping the bed,
roll to tummy, whisper of wet.
I glance back at you, in shiny-stare..
One slim shoulder, tilted in tease,
my pale toes winking, in midair.
Body soft, in wake of my bare.
You settle behind,
layer me line for line.
Warm with kisses,
fine-tossed
up my back
across my face..
Teeth and tongue at neck
as we skin-mingle in taste.
I arc my submission
in whimpers
under and through you.
Palm pressed upon me,
you enter
my smallest tight place..
can't resist that hard ache
until you slowly sink inside.
My hands grasping pillows,
you still suck and bite.
~I convulse as you thrust,
feed you sighs in a hush.
Sweat and skin in heavy pant,
a fist in my hair, a hand on my hand.
~Your hot liquid rush tickles my womb~
and mixes our sighs deep on my insides.
Neither of us quite ready
to think, to breathe, to move.
Published 14th May 2015
| Edited 21st Jul 2015
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15th May 2015 00:12am
Beautifully described. I thoroughly enjoyed this write. Thank you and welcome
15th May 2015 3:40am
15th May 2015 4:45am
Adoration is mine, that lush brings much to mind :)
Be on look-out for you too!
~d
Be on look-out for you too!
~d
15th May 2015 6:45am
16th May 2015 1:08am
16th May 2015 8:26pm
This woman at her best.this is luxurious as love making must be. it is the most difficult of subjects being a mixture of earth and heaven
16th May 2015 11:59pm
Anonymous
16th May 2015 10:02pm
Very steamy and intimate...."a fist in my hair,a hand on my hand"...diggin the visuals you laid out here...very nice!!
17th May 2015 00:00am
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18th May 2015 7:16am
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18th May 2015 8:19am
Anonymous
27th May 2015 3:31am
this is yummy on the tummy, very SLOW and enjoyable!
5th Jun 2015 5:40pm
14th Jun 2015 10:47pm
22nd Jun 2015 4:39am
Warm thx to you m'dear!
So sweet of u to stop in, means much that you
drop a line here ;)
curtsies
~d
So sweet of u to stop in, means much that you
drop a line here ;)
curtsies
~d
21st Jun 2015 7:32pm
Love the last couple o lines the most,
"Neither of us quite ready-
To think, to breathe, to move." that is a beautiful moment, always like those moments... Course there be times your just passed right out from all the hard, well, ya know hehehe... ;) I really like how you did this... rarely ever do I comment on erotic, but this was good, just had to let ya know darlin, very well done: wolf / Eddie
"Neither of us quite ready-
To think, to breathe, to move." that is a beautiful moment, always like those moments... Course there be times your just passed right out from all the hard, well, ya know hehehe... ;) I really like how you did this... rarely ever do I comment on erotic, but this was good, just had to let ya know darlin, very well done: wolf / Eddie
22nd Jun 2015 4:45am
Aww.. you soo rock fer venturin' in!
This one was a vera special verse fer m'dear heart & it is great to see you here!
passin' out aftr shud always translate to
"leemee 'lone..u know I luvu" rofls..
be well Wolf;)
~d
This one was a vera special verse fer m'dear heart & it is great to see you here!
passin' out aftr shud always translate to
"leemee 'lone..u know I luvu" rofls..
be well Wolf;)
~d
