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MS. NEED MORE
Do I need say more
except that her
name was Miss Need More
and she always needed more
than whatever she got for sure.
“More and More” was her motto
for her family she was more of a daughter
and for all the men who did love her
she was more of a ditcher
forgive me for being rude to her
and calling her a bitch here.
Need I say more about her
except that her name was Miss Need More
but in this world of the now and here
we definitely don’t need more
of her whom we go chasing after
except that her
name was Miss Need More
and she always needed more
than whatever she got for sure.
“More and More” was her motto
for her family she was more of a daughter
and for all the men who did love her
she was more of a ditcher
forgive me for being rude to her
and calling her a bitch here.
Need I say more about her
except that her name was Miss Need More
but in this world of the now and here
we definitely don’t need more
of her whom we go chasing after
Published 10th May 2015
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Anonymous
10th May 2015 10:32am
you really pulled that off nicely. i love the ditcher/ bitch here. how you pull us along with the word 'more' makes this almost feel like a roundel. i never lost your tone and it moved very well. very nice.
10th May 2015 4:17pm
