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a cloud...
it was raining outside,
so I invited it in and
asked it what was wrong...
it wouldn't tell me,
but whatever it was
it soon evaporated...
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Anonymous
10th May 2015 4:02am
It must've lived in Arizona. . .nothing survives here, not even the clouds:(. . .Enjoyed. . .xoxo, Devlin.
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10th May 2015 10:36pm
there's parts of London like that -
some pubs around here have
there own atmosphere..:)
some pubs around here have
there own atmosphere..:)
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10th May 2015 5:45pm
strangely made me think of Winnie the Pooh being a little black rain cloud hovering over the honey tree,......
Possibly need to increase my meds
another enjoyable write :-)
Possibly need to increase my meds
another enjoyable write :-)
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