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that's the point...

 he said goodbye -
she asked him

where he was going -
he said nowhere
dartford
Written by dartford (Paul S...)
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Re: that's the point...
(Tams)
9th May 2015 11:06pm
Eep...
Ahavati
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re: Re: that's the point...
(Paul S...)
10th May 2015 10:28pm
um..:)
dartford
Re: that's the point...
9th May 2015 11:40pm
Your writing’s sharp and fun.
Pishashee
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re: Re: that's the point...
(Paul S...)
10th May 2015 10:29pm
I'm on pins..:)
dartford
Re: that's the point...
10th May 2015 8:33am
LMFAO.  Love this.  
Virginiapetal
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re: Re: that's the point...
(Paul S...)
10th May 2015 10:30pm
I'm glad! thanks, Virginia..:)
dartford
Re: that's the point...
(14397816)
10th May 2015 5:04pm
gave me an unusual Sunday smile :-)
David_Macleod
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re: Re: that's the point...
(Paul S...)
10th May 2015 10:31pm
Sunday's not great, eh?

nearly done..:)
dartford
Re: that's the point...
10th May 2015 7:57pm
it's all uphill from here...
Hashman
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re: Re: that's the point...
(Paul S...)
10th May 2015 10:31pm
chin up..!
dartford

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