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"Suction"
A guy may believe
He should only receive
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To her, all else may be relative
Possibly a break if he doesn't provide excellent
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He never goes down, this is no lie
She will likely refuse to apply
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Do not deny her the glorious pleasure
She needs this in equal measure
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Satisfy that quivering need
Place a hungry tongue in her dripping heat
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Treat it like your life giving straw
Give that clit the proper draw
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Be the man, suck her prize, claim the cookie store
Keep at it, make her know, you'll not stop 'til she can stand no more
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*March 21, 2011*
Published 5th May 2015
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6th May 2015 1:01pm
"Vegas.... Vegas!" Hmmm, VV, how very fitting. It is all about the V! :) The flavor I savor. The reason for my mustache. My flavor saver! :)~
Thank you for the exceptional comment, S!
It is always flattering to cause a gasm, uh I mean, gasp. :D
xo
C.
Thank you for the exceptional comment, S!
It is always flattering to cause a gasm, uh I mean, gasp. :D
xo
C.
5th May 2015 7:03am
This was pretty good.
So sensual and true!
If a guy expects a women to give he should at least do the considerate thing and return a favor! Lol
Well done :)
So sensual and true!
If a guy expects a women to give he should at least do the considerate thing and return a favor! Lol
Well done :)
6th May 2015 1:05pm
Many thanks, Ms RJ.
Consideration is key. :)
It is an honor to know you found this worthy
of being among your RL selections.
Consideration is key. :)
It is an honor to know you found this worthy
of being among your RL selections.
7th May 2015 4:22pm
This one hits home C! You know!!
A generously giving woman needs to also be the recipient of such pleasure. If not, she may wander off in search for it elsewhere.
Bringing pleasure to your partner should be your focus. In doing so, your intimacy is enhanced trifold.
Why many people don't understand this just baffles me. You obviously do, which puts you in the "hard to find" category.
...may need to wander off to Vegas!
XO
Natalie 😊
A generously giving woman needs to also be the recipient of such pleasure. If not, she may wander off in search for it elsewhere.
Bringing pleasure to your partner should be your focus. In doing so, your intimacy is enhanced trifold.
Why many people don't understand this just baffles me. You obviously do, which puts you in the "hard to find" category.
...may need to wander off to Vegas!
XO
Natalie 😊
9th May 2015 6:20pm
Well, Natalie, I'm not, "hard to find." Should you find yourself in our City of Sin, you need only share your desire, finding me is quite easy. I encourage you to freely wander. :)
Thank you for the insightful feedback and the RL honor.
Why many others fail to understand this truth is easy to discern. They are selfish.
xo
C.
Thank you for the insightful feedback and the RL honor.
Why many others fail to understand this truth is easy to discern. They are selfish.
xo
C.
17th Mar 2016 11:24pm
I like seeing a piece on this topic. Give and receive in equal measure.
"Treat it like your life giving straw"
Niiice! Good ink. :]
"Treat it like your life giving straw"
Niiice! Good ink. :]
