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How I see You standing there as Being my Master while simply being a Man!
How I see You standing there as Being my Master while simply being a Man!
Many times I wonder, how I didn't notice how You stood before..
Not knowing how strong and tall You stand.
All awhile You have helped me grow to become who I am..
You have strive to teach, nurture and guide..
While pushing my limits so I will thrive in becoming perfect in Your eyes..
How could I not see Your strengths as You have showed me mine..
Through Your dominance You have set me free, allowing my submission to soften each step that has led me to where I have longed to be....
You have taught me how to accept and love who I am, no matter my flaws that might be seen by other Men.
I felt Your compassion when You took me as I was....
Nothing more than a humble once beautiful servant, that almost gave up to ever feeling loved and alive again..
Through discipline and training I have learned to better myself..
And when I have forgotten my place or denyed of being true.. Your punishment given and received has reminded me of my purpose.
And has renewed my inner being of being Your faithful and loyal servant..
With Your firm, stern yet loving mastering hands. You have stripped me of my broken past...
Allowing the beauty of my submission to flourish and become true..
As I look up while kneeling at Your feet..
Not only do I see You as my Master, I am loving seeing You as my strong yet loving of a passionate Man!
Many times I wonder, how I didn't notice how You stood before..
Not knowing how strong and tall You stand.
All awhile You have helped me grow to become who I am..
You have strive to teach, nurture and guide..
While pushing my limits so I will thrive in becoming perfect in Your eyes..
How could I not see Your strengths as You have showed me mine..
Through Your dominance You have set me free, allowing my submission to soften each step that has led me to where I have longed to be....
You have taught me how to accept and love who I am, no matter my flaws that might be seen by other Men.
I felt Your compassion when You took me as I was....
Nothing more than a humble once beautiful servant, that almost gave up to ever feeling loved and alive again..
Through discipline and training I have learned to better myself..
And when I have forgotten my place or denyed of being true.. Your punishment given and received has reminded me of my purpose.
And has renewed my inner being of being Your faithful and loyal servant..
With Your firm, stern yet loving mastering hands. You have stripped me of my broken past...
Allowing the beauty of my submission to flourish and become true..
As I look up while kneeling at Your feet..
Not only do I see You as my Master, I am loving seeing You as my strong yet loving of a passionate Man!
Published 4th May 2015
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4th May 2015 1:26pm
What a lovely homage to your Keeper. i feel this way about my own. My only criticism is in line 10 where you say "...that almost gave up to ever feel loved and alive again..." This is very awkward wording. It might make more sense to say "...that almost gave up ever feeling loved and alive again..." Nice write!
4th May 2015 10:23pm
Thank you it does sound much better.. And sad to say my Master has given up on His self... He was in a bad car wreck a few months back and feels that the damage will cause me not to see Him as I did before... He is such a fool to throw we have away... I not care of looks and such I would love Him no matter what.. But guess He feels less than a Man.. and has decided to break my heart
5th May 2015 2:03pm
sounds a bit one sided with you in a subservient role - or maybe being a man I don't see it.
Recovery can be very difficult - I am in a situation where I will not recover and find our relationship has changed, mainly because of male foolishness - not sure what the cure is
excellent ink :-)
Recovery can be very difficult - I am in a situation where I will not recover and find our relationship has changed, mainly because of male foolishness - not sure what the cure is
excellent ink :-)
