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Why Roses Have Thorns
Roses have thorns.
Handle with care.
Your love, a delicate
Wonder I share.
If rain is what
The roses need,
Than you're my rain
I thirst, indeed...
...I need you!
Handle with care.
Your love, a delicate
Wonder I share.
If rain is what
The roses need,
Than you're my rain
I thirst, indeed...
...I need you!
Published 29th Apr 2015
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29th Apr 2015 10:34am
I like this simplicity of this poem and to be honest, I don't think it needs the last line. That, of course, is up to your discretion. Loved it!
29th Apr 2015 4:32pm
Thank you for reading and commenting! Glad you enjoyed it. Are you referring to the "I need you" line? I agree lol
29th Apr 2015 2:30pm
29th Apr 2015 4:35pm
Awww sweet you are. Thanks for your kind words. Glad you enjoyed reading.
30th Apr 2015 5:49pm
30th Apr 2015 6:46pm
1st May 2015 8:48pm
excellent wee poem - I hope whoever you wrote it for truly appreciates its deep meaning
:-)
:-)
2nd May 2015 9:23am
Thank you David. He does. He is so special, he brings out the best in me! :-)
