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he held up three fingers
red yellow green
he explained
i was not really
listening, i
didn't really need to
only echoed back
his desires
take them please
i never
have minded
at least
because once
i am gone
his beating
ticking
screeching
aching
pushes pulses
any existence
fades away
then the grey water
feel drowning free
i am lost sweet
nameless
faceless
painless
quiet
silence
he can do unlimited
it never really mattered
in the first place
takes me
shakes me
brings me back
his distant velvet calls
stay with me
stay with me
he rings
instantly gone away
pain returns
blink through
my blurry tears
still with me
his velvet cuts
all i can see
his panicked emerald eyes
always so
green
i softly murmur to him
back so quickly
reality slants
to feel again
cells scream shriek
my closed lips
guided by his body
bitter sharp calm
i slip under
in dimensions
nothing around
breath gone
body still
not existing
i am pure
red yellow green
he explained
i was not really
listening, i
didn't really need to
only echoed back
his desires
take them please
i never
have minded
at least
because once
i am gone
his beating
ticking
screeching
aching
pushes pulses
any existence
fades away
then the grey water
feel drowning free
i am lost sweet
nameless
faceless
painless
quiet
silence
he can do unlimited
it never really mattered
in the first place
takes me
shakes me
brings me back
his distant velvet calls
stay with me
stay with me
he rings
instantly gone away
pain returns
blink through
my blurry tears
still with me
his velvet cuts
all i can see
his panicked emerald eyes
always so
green
i softly murmur to him
back so quickly
reality slants
to feel again
cells scream shriek
my closed lips
guided by his body
bitter sharp calm
i slip under
in dimensions
nothing around
breath gone
body still
not existing
i am pure
Published 26th Apr 2015
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26th Apr 2015 10:15am
What an interesting position on submission. We subs tend to realize that each time we fall under our Master's hand we are baptized, reborn and hopefully molded into something worthy. Nice job with this@
