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this is nice cheyenne it reads easy and is honest.

i was a bit put off by the second line of the last stanza,it made sense and fits the content but it is very long in comparison to the rest of the lines."tell me before i attach" might fit.

it is a good poem .

here realy poet shows the thoughts of lover, during the true love and if you just play the game of love in both situations
( if you love me
dont let me fall
if you want me
dont let me walk away )


(if you dont want me
please tell me before i get too attached
if im not wanted in your life
push me away like everyone else )

I just adore this. I love the content, the structure...word choice. It's simple but powerful. It's a lot harder to make a powerful statment with few words than to create one with illuions and fluff.

Psst! Guess what? I wont push you away. Pinkie swear :3