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Final Hours
Cool wind has stopped blowing
Slowing without knowing
Peacefully, in silence
Trembling with defiance
Lonely and astray
Can't find our way
Hurting without speaking
Saying we're OK
Darkness does win
Coldness settles in
Waiting to lie still
Life's going downhill
Sorry we failed
No solution was found
Searched for another way
He's leaving us today
For Lasting Peace....
Slowing without knowing
Peacefully, in silence
Trembling with defiance
Lonely and astray
Can't find our way
Hurting without speaking
Saying we're OK
Darkness does win
Coldness settles in
Waiting to lie still
Life's going downhill
Sorry we failed
No solution was found
Searched for another way
He's leaving us today
For Lasting Peace....
Published 14th Apr 2015
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14th Apr 2015 10:05pm
Raading this poem makes me so sad. It's so touching and heart-wrenching. Losing someone you love is the most bitter thing in life.
15th Apr 2015 12:46pm
Thanks for seeing the true meaning. I stayed home yesterday, and the misses sat with me all day, sometimes we talked, mostly we just sat and stared.
