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..Who gave up.
I'm not one for romance,
Neither for lust..
But you just won't have faith in me.
And for that you suck!
If you were a real "man" like you said,
You'd still be holding me close..
And not wishing I was dead.
I can't believe you wouldn't see the light of day..
But truth be told I am the one.
The one, that got away.
Neither for lust..
But you just won't have faith in me.
And for that you suck!
If you were a real "man" like you said,
You'd still be holding me close..
And not wishing I was dead.
I can't believe you wouldn't see the light of day..
But truth be told I am the one.
The one, that got away.
Published 13th Apr 2015
| Edited 7th Jun 2015
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6th Jun 2015 2:15pm
Well done. Raw and honest. Can I suggest editing "And that sucks", to words a bit more gritty? "And for this YOU SUCK"
Cheers!
Cheers!
7th Jun 2015 00:15am
