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Addicted To Impulsive Thoughts
Thrill, Risk and Danger!
Those are my life's 3 medicines...
I don't jump from the cliff and seek adrenaline, I merely stand on the edge to whittness my extremes balancing.
All my dials pushed full,
all my choices and impulsive thoughts drool...they're explosions of a fool, with no control gauge for desired actions, my reality dials go uncontrolled and wild.
With only 2 choices in my head 'ALL OR NOTHING', living a fast paced life,
with only a 6 number dice.
My mind always on the move...stopping still is wasting time I can't afford to lose!
...Reality is my only feared fatality...
.. ..`'Man¿Deyer`'.. ...
Those are my life's 3 medicines...
I don't jump from the cliff and seek adrenaline, I merely stand on the edge to whittness my extremes balancing.
All my dials pushed full,
all my choices and impulsive thoughts drool...they're explosions of a fool, with no control gauge for desired actions, my reality dials go uncontrolled and wild.
With only 2 choices in my head 'ALL OR NOTHING', living a fast paced life,
with only a 6 number dice.
My mind always on the move...stopping still is wasting time I can't afford to lose!
...Reality is my only feared fatality...
.. ..`'Man¿Deyer`'.. ...
Published 12th Apr 2015
| Edited 20th Apr 2015
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12th Apr 2015 11:17am
You wouldn't, by any chance, be bipolar would you? Because I am and I have been down this road so many times I lost count. I love the last line: reality is my only feared fatality. And one tiny nitpick. You spelled 'whittness' when it should be 'witness'. If that was done on purpose I apologize for playing teacher.
12th Apr 2015 12:13pm
Thanks alot for your feedback mate. I have considered thay I may do but proved negative. I have severe ADHD which I dont take medication for, so the hyperactive, then suddenly angry and screaming mood swings do happen more than id like. It was unintentional, im horrific at spelling...as daft as it sounds haha :)
