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Altruistic
Phyllis
Is selfless and self-sacrificing.
Her husband
Whose desires come first
-Even when they conflict with her own.
Two year daughter
Genteel
Born without silver spoon
With an umbrella atleast.
Black in hell,
Pointed
twisted
Eaten
with phenlzine
And digesting ranitidine.
Alleviate
the matter again,
Love..
Turned up lust
Castigate
Capitulate
Intimate
Incest
Noceo men.
Victim
of the society
with bucket rings
But remember.........
Amadeus is love.Theophilus is love.Gottlieb is love.
Left 41 symphonies for us.
Is selfless and self-sacrificing.
Her husband
Whose desires come first
-Even when they conflict with her own.
Two year daughter
Genteel
Born without silver spoon
With an umbrella atleast.
Black in hell,
Pointed
twisted
Eaten
with phenlzine
And digesting ranitidine.
Alleviate
the matter again,
Love..
Turned up lust
Castigate
Capitulate
Intimate
Incest
Noceo men.
Victim
of the society
with bucket rings
But remember.........
Amadeus is love.Theophilus is love.Gottlieb is love.
Left 41 symphonies for us.
Published 9th Apr 2015
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9th Apr 2015 9:14pm
I like the way you begin this with folks like Phyllis, her husband and their daughter Genteel (great name!) then progress to Amadeus, Theophilus and Gottlieb. You make a few very potent observations along the way. "Love... / Turned up lust" has the ring of truth to some extent and applies very accurately to certain relationships. And those 41 symphonies? They were left altruistically (I hope) but how many people are still listening. Really fine work, McJay.
Anonymous
19th Apr 2015 10:36pm
You have such a rare talent! I have never had the pleasure of reading anyone quite like you.
25th Apr 2015 6:02am
25th Apr 2015 11:44am
