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To my Deep Undergrounders
You were right,
Of course.
He’s on another bender
Another heroin one way track
To oblivion
While his son sits beside him
And says,
“I wish dad would be normal
Not like this:”
And he hangs his head down
And makes sleeping noises
Lifts his head up and laughs
Because it’s funny, really,
To a five year old.
He nestles himself into
The crook of his dad’s waist
Waiting for him to maybe wake up
But he sleeps on, forever,
In a black, molasses world
Of paradise.
Of course.
He’s on another bender
Another heroin one way track
To oblivion
While his son sits beside him
And says,
“I wish dad would be normal
Not like this:”
And he hangs his head down
And makes sleeping noises
Lifts his head up and laughs
Because it’s funny, really,
To a five year old.
He nestles himself into
The crook of his dad’s waist
Waiting for him to maybe wake up
But he sleeps on, forever,
In a black, molasses world
Of paradise.
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8th Apr 2015 6:29pm
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re: Re: To my Deep Undergrounders
8th Apr 2015 6:54pm
Thank you, Schiitaryn. Can you believe it only took one day!!!! thank you for your thoughts, though. Helps!
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8th Apr 2015 6:45pm
re: Re: To my Deep Undergrounders
8th Apr 2015 6:54pm
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Anonymous
8th Apr 2015 8:26pm
Very moving. Prayers your way!
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Re: To my Deep Undergrounders
8th Apr 2015 9:21pm
That's so sad about this guy's five year old kid, Virginia. But it's also sad about you having to put up with him. I respect your loyalty, but I hope there are limits. It doesn't sound like he's too big on self-improvement. Maybe it's time to move on?
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8th Apr 2015 10:30pm
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9th Apr 2015 00:02am
Re: To my Deep Undergrounders
9th Apr 2015 00:40am
an episode from your past, long ago & far away, I hope, but the memory hurts nonetheless.
children are blessed to sleep in the warmth of paradise...
children are blessed to sleep in the warmth of paradise...
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Re: To my Deep Undergrounders
9th Apr 2015 1:11am
"While his son sits beside him
And says,
“I wish dad would be normal
Not like this:”"
I agree with Crowfly. That breaks my heart more than anything else.
Five can be a horrible age. He may need counseling when he grows up. He seems to understand SOMETHING is not right.
And says,
“I wish dad would be normal
Not like this:”"
I agree with Crowfly. That breaks my heart more than anything else.
Five can be a horrible age. He may need counseling when he grows up. He seems to understand SOMETHING is not right.
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9th Apr 2015 4:19pm