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Inane getaways (who the hell are you challenge)
I'd walk as if I were blank,
though my every step will
leave bloodstains behind it, I know.
I'd speak as if i were blank,
my thoughts long and lost
have abandoned morality, I know.
My words, reminiscent of
memories, often find small,
inane getaways but you don't
know how to read them, I know.
though my every step will
leave bloodstains behind it, I know.
I'd speak as if i were blank,
my thoughts long and lost
have abandoned morality, I know.
My words, reminiscent of
memories, often find small,
inane getaways but you don't
know how to read them, I know.
Published 17th May 2011
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17th May 2011 1:44pm
which is in fact reality because we tend to believe that time will heal human emotions which is not the case. The only difference is that now after about one year or so since you lost your dearest you are now able to express yourself much deeper. I always cherish reading long poems from you because you craft delicious and superb words and when you compose a short poem I feel hungry for more from you and when you compose more like in this one I start crying. Your words compell tears from my eyes.
Im growing up, so do my poems i guess :)
You always praise me more than im worth but at the same time you set my boundaries to the extend which i, unconsciously or not, try to break with my every composition.
You're such an encourager! i admire you and most importantly I thank You for it.
You always praise me more than im worth but at the same time you set my boundaries to the extend which i, unconsciously or not, try to break with my every composition.
You're such an encourager! i admire you and most importantly I thank You for it.
18th May 2011 10:14pm
a very haunting poem to read.it does tell allot about your personality and your continued affection for your "dearest".the poem is written well and with much thought.i applaud your ability to say so much in so few words.i will add however that i do think there are other aspects of you that may have been omitted.
excellent poem.
excellent poem.
19th May 2011 11:18am
thank you.
yes you are right, i haven't included much about myself cause a poem as long as it might be can't fit them all or they were too personal to add.
yes you are right, i haven't included much about myself cause a poem as long as it might be can't fit them all or they were too personal to add.
Anonymous
20th Jan 2012 1:12pm
This really captured me. It has a sad undertone which forces us to make us feel. I felt a connection with it. Beautiful.
20th Jan 2012 2:45pm
