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Your Epic Love (Collaboration with GoodOlBoy)
I'm caught in your entanglement
This web you've spun of adoration
Arrested, struggling, twisting and turning
Falling ever deeper into you
Your spells bewitching me
Razing the order in my mind,
Becoming the axis of my existence
It's your own enticing web
It only looks like mine
Echoes the love we share
Because I've already taken
It and made it my center
Any spell I've cast your way
Requires only one thing to be
The enchantment is there
And your love is the key.
You've sunk your glinting dagger
Shining blade of hope in my heart
Scraping free the pain and strife
Cutting away doubt and indecision
Slicing fear and terror
Setting my true self free
Flying high on glorious raptures
I offer you the handle of hope's blade
Pointed and placed to my heart
Sink it to the hilt deeply
Claim my purest love forever
Use the radiant edge to empty
My veins of hate and hurt
Refill me with your love and joy
Consummate our blessed union
with this action of tender violence.
You are the brilliant sun
The brightest luminous star
In the dank labyrinth of my mind
My soul rejoices in the emanation
Of your gentle loving smile
Basking in the warmth of your heat
Blazing desire consuming my entity
You are the song in my life
The sound of my salvation
The light that binds us blinds
Those who threaten our happiness
It shines through the ether of torment
Dissolves the empty blackness
Leaving you to become incandescent
In the presence of the gods,
Bowing,penitent to your glow.
You are the euphoric joy
Bliss in my broken still-healing soul
Words a balm to my weary spirit
Your touch being a combustible thing
Devouring all petty stifling inhibitions
Burning inferno of desire inflaming
Raging wildly disrupting control
Destroy all suffering between our souls
Lifting us to soar among the stars
Use your perfect love; perfect trust
To bless my life with your presence.
There is no phrase lofty enough to
Describe the beauty I behold
Nothing could ever possibly express
The absolute perfection of you
Or the depth of my love for you
GoodOlBoy, THANK YOU for writing such a WONDERFUL beautiful poem with me!
This web you've spun of adoration
Arrested, struggling, twisting and turning
Falling ever deeper into you
Your spells bewitching me
Razing the order in my mind,
Becoming the axis of my existence
It's your own enticing web
It only looks like mine
Echoes the love we share
Because I've already taken
It and made it my center
Any spell I've cast your way
Requires only one thing to be
The enchantment is there
And your love is the key.
You've sunk your glinting dagger
Shining blade of hope in my heart
Scraping free the pain and strife
Cutting away doubt and indecision
Slicing fear and terror
Setting my true self free
Flying high on glorious raptures
I offer you the handle of hope's blade
Pointed and placed to my heart
Sink it to the hilt deeply
Claim my purest love forever
Use the radiant edge to empty
My veins of hate and hurt
Refill me with your love and joy
Consummate our blessed union
with this action of tender violence.
You are the brilliant sun
The brightest luminous star
In the dank labyrinth of my mind
My soul rejoices in the emanation
Of your gentle loving smile
Basking in the warmth of your heat
Blazing desire consuming my entity
You are the song in my life
The sound of my salvation
The light that binds us blinds
Those who threaten our happiness
It shines through the ether of torment
Dissolves the empty blackness
Leaving you to become incandescent
In the presence of the gods,
Bowing,penitent to your glow.
You are the euphoric joy
Bliss in my broken still-healing soul
Words a balm to my weary spirit
Your touch being a combustible thing
Devouring all petty stifling inhibitions
Burning inferno of desire inflaming
Raging wildly disrupting control
Destroy all suffering between our souls
Lifting us to soar among the stars
Use your perfect love; perfect trust
To bless my life with your presence.
There is no phrase lofty enough to
Describe the beauty I behold
Nothing could ever possibly express
The absolute perfection of you
Or the depth of my love for you
GoodOlBoy, THANK YOU for writing such a WONDERFUL beautiful poem with me!
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