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Free you did not break me
The truth is, there's no better time to be happy than right now. If not now, when?
Flying like a bird humming like a bee
Im alive i really feel free,
This cruel world will never break me I'm flying I'm drifting a pone a breeze wondering were its taking me
don't care its the freedom not the place this beats being trapped in a love birds cage day after day yes your love bird me the one you drove away
I'm free I'm flying
high even the clouds make me happy as they float as i fly by
Flying like a bird humming like a bee
Im alive i really feel free,
This cruel world will never break me I'm flying I'm drifting a pone a breeze wondering were its taking me
don't care its the freedom not the place this beats being trapped in a love birds cage day after day yes your love bird me the one you drove away
I'm free I'm flying
high even the clouds make me happy as they float as i fly by
Published 1st Apr 2015
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1st Apr 2015 10:41am
I will offer you some honest critique, though kindly meant. You might want to break up your lines a little so that the form is tighter and easier to read. The two very long lines don't quite fit with the shorter ones. Other than that I thoroughly enjoyed reading your work. Nice write!
1st Apr 2015 6:04pm
Aw thank you so much i apresate that its alot harder tiping on a phone screen than writing not the best at grammer ether if im honest lol school was none exsistent as a child taken on board :))
