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Penetrate
I want to penetrate you
Without asking permission
I want to put it inside you
Without needing your submission
No need for foreplay
Or listening to Coldplay
Although you will need to wake up
For me to do this fuck up
It’s your mind I want to penetrate
Between your legs is safe
I don’t want to be your playmate
Inside your head I want to strafe
Why can you not just understand
There’s a child inside this man
A child who was smothered
That needs you to mother
Just once in a while
A gentle loving smile
A stroke of my hair
The feeling you care
Try thinking before speaking
And understanding before freaking
Please just stop your clucking
It can’t all be about fuckin
or DU ratings :-)
Published 29th Mar 2015
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30th Mar 2015 00:08am
30th Mar 2015 1:00am
30th Mar 2015 4:11pm
This poem, David, has me in a dither (not sure that's a real word). But there are a couple of themes in here that throw us in a whirlwind of emotion! Crazy.
30th Mar 2015 6:53pm
LOL - your right there are more than a few themes here - the main one being a man wanting and failing to have meaningful intercourse with a partner who is sex obsessed - what an unusual man (lol)
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30th Mar 2015 9:01pm
I like this. I think it is more important to penetrate the mind than anything else. Not always easily done. But always meaningfully done.
31st Mar 2015 00:05am
31st Mar 2015 9:58pm
1st Apr 2015 2:20am
thank you for your comments they are always valued
:-)
the mind is sexy :-)
:-)
the mind is sexy :-)
