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the illusion of love
I look into her eyes
i just see lies
she wants me in her bed
i want her dead
she says she loves me like she means it
but i see the truth
she will just abuse
i wil be used
she acts so nice but
i see the price
this love she show
is just a falacy that will not last
i dont know what to do,
i will always lose,
should i cry,
should i die,
i have no might.
i just see lies
she wants me in her bed
i want her dead
she says she loves me like she means it
but i see the truth
she will just abuse
i wil be used
she acts so nice but
i see the price
this love she show
is just a falacy that will not last
i dont know what to do,
i will always lose,
should i cry,
should i die,
i have no might.
Published 16th May 2011
| Edited 17th May 2011
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16th May 2011 6:52pm
This shouldn't have an extreme content warning, there's really nothing extreme about it. The line "she acts so nice, but" has that extra semicolon which needs removing. The line "this love she show" should be "this love she shows" instead. Spelling: "fallacy."
17th May 2011 5:52am
17th May 2011 8:21pm
18th May 2011 2:34am
