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An age of nothing.
No freedom.
No say.
Go here.
Don't do that.
Sit down and pay attention.
Study this.
Don't say that.
Don't wear that.
Do it now.
Because I said so.
That's why.
No freedom of originality.
Why aren't you on the debate team? You're brother was the President.
I
hate
it.
No freedom.
No say.
Go here.
Don't do that.
Sit down and pay attention.
Study this.
Don't say that.
Don't wear that.
Do it now.
Because I said so.
That's why.
No freedom of originality.
Why aren't you on the debate team? You're brother was the President.
I
hate
it.
Published 15th May 2011
| Edited 8th Jun 2011
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15th May 2011 5:24am
very honest, I like it. Also welcome I hope you enjoy your time spent on this site.
15th May 2011 5:39am
Anonymous
15th May 2011 7:11am
is good. A true thought.
15th May 2011 1:29pm
15th May 2011 4:08pm
i think a lot of people go through this kind of thing when they're 16 and then there are other people such as myself who was sent off to become an adult far too soon. the moral is we all go through hardships that help define who we will become. originality is misspelled. i like this thought because i think many people can relate and you place a perspective on others that may not beable to.
8th Jun 2011 5:09am
Thank you so much! I didn't notice that it was misspelled. I fixed it. :)
