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don't ask too much of me...
alright so I made a mistake...
she said what were you thinking of..?
he said if I told you that
would be another one...
she said what were you thinking of..?
he said if I told you that
would be another one...
Published 19th Mar 2015
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19th Mar 2015 3:27am
I often talk of not thinking so much. I never do. But I'm thinking about it. :)
19th Mar 2015 3:17pm
I've always thought thinking
is great, because nobody's
listening...they're not, are they..?
is great, because nobody's
listening...they're not, are they..?
19th Mar 2015 12:00pm
I love your poems because they're so succinct and yet profound. Thanks again for another smile.
19th Mar 2015 3:19pm
19th Mar 2015 4:58pm
Good job bro... you thought before you spoke,
lmao...
Your comedic writes are the bomb man...
Darker.
lmao...
Your comedic writes are the bomb man...
Darker.
19th Mar 2015 7:48pm
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21st Mar 2015 6:45am
Too late the image was cast the moment you brought it to my minds door..we're visual people after all..
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