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Re: Robot smile
18th Mar 2015 7:40pm
I AM NOT! lol... Ok u got me
I pretended to be upset lol...
Seriously though, for whomever
it's meant- this is 'telling'
I pretended to be upset lol...
Seriously though, for whomever
it's meant- this is 'telling'
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re: Re: Robot smile
18th Mar 2015 9:56pm
No, you're definitely not.
You're nice and kind, aren't you!
I wanted it to be telling since I need to tell. At least in my senryu ...
Thanks so much, Poe!
You're nice and kind, aren't you!
I wanted it to be telling since I need to tell. At least in my senryu ...
Thanks so much, Poe!
Re: Robot smile
18th Mar 2015 9:49pm
re: Re: Robot smile
18th Mar 2015 10:01pm
Hey JeJe! Glad you love it! The idea rattled around in my brain for days, didn't know how to put it but today the poem finally took shape :-). Thank you for your lovely comment! xo
Re: Robot smile
18th Mar 2015 10:39pm
hard to live in a world of mechanical people, Chi, we prefer the natural types...
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re: Re: Robot smile
20th Mar 2015 7:37pm
Re: Robot smile
18th Mar 2015 11:25pm
re: Re: Robot smile
20th Mar 2015 7:40pm
Thank you Paul.
I've known at least one person
whose skin is covered in lies.
Layer by layer...
I've known at least one person
whose skin is covered in lies.
Layer by layer...
re: Re: Robot smile
20th Mar 2015 7:41pm
Re: Robot smile
19th Mar 2015 8:08pm
From one of my favorite songs, and maybe a different perspective than some, but “Say a prayer for the pretender.” – Jackson Browne
Although robots are very cool, I prefer the real too. But don't get me started on, Asimov.. :)
Very nice scribes here, Miss Chi. :)
Although robots are very cool, I prefer the real too. But don't get me started on, Asimov.. :)
Very nice scribes here, Miss Chi. :)
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re: Re: Robot smile
20th Mar 2015 7:46pm
Thanks a lot, Pish :-).
I'd love to have a household robot, yes!
But he mustn't lie!
I'd love to have a household robot, yes!
But he mustn't lie!
Re: Robot smile
19th Mar 2015 11:05pm
Some can do this so easily.
I like how this can be read two different ways.
I like how this can be read two different ways.
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re: Re: Robot smile
20th Mar 2015 7:48pm
So everybody can choose the way
he wants to read it.
I think we'd read it the same way.
Thanks, dear Lena.
he wants to read it.
I think we'd read it the same way.
Thanks, dear Lena.