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Ostentatious
Painstaking
A paltry panacea
Meteors are evanescent....
The enigma of being lost
like Hitler committing enormity
--------An unremitting battle-----
The trepidation of the opponents
Being on the verge to disply courage
The fact may remain the same
Though and although
History repeats itself...
Minds are replete
Fearing reprisals from the terrorists,
His manners were reprehensible
Uncle Ted was resolute.....
A paltry panacea
Meteors are evanescent....
The enigma of being lost
like Hitler committing enormity
--------An unremitting battle-----
The trepidation of the opponents
Being on the verge to disply courage
The fact may remain the same
Though and although
History repeats itself...
Minds are replete
Fearing reprisals from the terrorists,
His manners were reprehensible
Uncle Ted was resolute.....
Published 18th Mar 2015
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18th Mar 2015 2:18pm
There's a lot of earth shaking events here, Hitler and meteors, then summed up as an unremitting battle. Later history repeats itself, the beast slouches in again with terrorists on its back. Then your poem winds down in saying "His manners were reprehensible" and "Uncle Ted was resolute." That's a really quaint conclusion after the global warning at the start. It struck me as being hilarious, and I hope that was the intent. Say hi to Uncle Ted for me!
