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i do not like this. it is well written, but i do not like it.

this is just an aside, sorry, but your
comment got me thinking - I often
push the 'like this' button if I think
a poem has been well done but,
when I do so, 'like' isn't really what I
mean...I guess I just mean I find
the piece exhibits some skill - sorry
again, for rambling..:)

i know. i hate clicking the like button. i do, but i always feel....awkward if the subject is not really likeable.

lol ... I know what you mean dear Goddess ... It's just a bit of a vent for a king without a kingdom

More like a prisoner in his own realm

Such cruel clarity. Why do we do this to ourselves?

I'm not sure but it does build an appreciation for the better moments

The topic is vice-versa when it comes to my situation... cruel injustice indeed.

Darker.

It sucks being on either side of this coin. Thanks for the read.

Incredible piece!

Thank you so much for commenting ... I'm honored.

Tell me about it kid.  

I live in an old three wing brownstone condo.  Shaped in a U, our bedrooms are only a few feet from each other.  

Almost every summer night, at the most unpredictable times, the silence would be interrupted by the orgasmic moans of a young woman.  I, along with some of the other residents were unsuccessful in figuring out who this hot blooded creature was.  And like my neighbor lady said, "it's annoying, but in a very entertaining sort of way."

LMAO! ... great story snugglebuck.

A tormenting idea to listen to your love making love to herself, excluding you. Soul ripping and raw.

Earplugs and whiskey help.