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Observational Poems
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looking to release
pounding hooks to reap shrapnel
bloody hands my toll
Written by
LobodeSanPedro
Published
20th Mar 2015
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Anonymous
20th Mar 2015 10:36am
don't like this one either, LSP!
you choose words well and paint vivid pictures. but i don't like it.
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LobodeSanPedro
20th Mar 2015 9:08pm
LOL ... nothing to dislike per se. I was reflecting on my battle with the heavy bag at the gym ... When I took of my gloves and wraps off my knuckles were cut and bloodied - but somehow I liked it.
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Chiyo
(Miss Chi)
24th Mar 2015 11:09pm
Right, you're boxing, too ... a decent toll :-). Like it!
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LobodeSanPedro
25th Mar 2015 1:32am
My knuckles are a little worse for wear - but it's a strange addiction - I know you know.
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