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Verisimilitude
The veracity of young George
is legendary...........
But utopian-----sometimes----
Thoughts replete with fuzzy dice
Parsimonious
Exacerbated his soul skin,
Tried to exhort--------
-------Covert activites from rumours.
A real coup over devil waters
dancing around the roses
with tulips over corners.....
Kings abdicated..
Million years ago
yet another waiting years.....
.......Abhorred views of an abject person.
Culmination has not finished yet.......
is legendary...........
But utopian-----sometimes----
Thoughts replete with fuzzy dice
Parsimonious
Exacerbated his soul skin,
Tried to exhort--------
-------Covert activites from rumours.
A real coup over devil waters
dancing around the roses
with tulips over corners.....
Kings abdicated..
Million years ago
yet another waiting years.....
.......Abhorred views of an abject person.
Culmination has not finished yet.......
Published 17th Mar 2015
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17th Mar 2015 8:06am
"A real coup over devil waters
dancing around the roses
with tulips over corners....." -Loved :)
Nice work!
dancing around the roses
with tulips over corners....." -Loved :)
Nice work!
17th Mar 2015 4:49pm
So many key words, and very well chosen. "Abhorred views of an abject person." If they're groveling their words are weak. Your poem rings true!
