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Stagnation
Wild whispers
Calm coldness
Squalor souls
Recondite rhymes
Redolent roses
Putative principles
Verbose verses.
Meaningless months
In total inactivity
Zero fervor
Maintained dictum
Holy words in motion
But soul
In complete rest.
Calm coldness
Squalor souls
Recondite rhymes
Redolent roses
Putative principles
Verbose verses.
Meaningless months
In total inactivity
Zero fervor
Maintained dictum
Holy words in motion
But soul
In complete rest.
Published 11th Mar 2015
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12th Mar 2015 9:00pm
Maybe the stagnation's a state of grace if the soul's in complete rest. But maybe not. Those meaningless months and zero fervor are cause for concern. Fascinating job, McJay.
13th Mar 2015 2:00am
Thanks Mr. Crowfly to share what you thought about my verse.Hope to see you again !
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28th Apr 2015 1:02pm
Great piece. Where do you find these words? Like William Swann said, you have one hell of a vocabulary.
