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Sometimes
Sometimes I wait
using this as bait
sitting by my phone, I wait.
Sometimes I write
still wont hear back by night
yet to you, I write.
Sometimes I cry
hoping you'll see my eye
with you on my mind, I cry.
Sometimes I wait
should I restate
oh how, I always wait.
using this as bait
sitting by my phone, I wait.
Sometimes I write
still wont hear back by night
yet to you, I write.
Sometimes I cry
hoping you'll see my eye
with you on my mind, I cry.
Sometimes I wait
should I restate
oh how, I always wait.
Published 10th Mar 2015
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10th Mar 2015 7:54pm
Elegant and simple. I like the way you put this, it's subtle but poignant.
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11th Mar 2015 4:13am
Thank you so much. My main goal was for it to be very simple and to flow. I appreciate it :)
